Date: 4/7/2008 7:44:48 AM
Nickname: Mafreek
Comment: Dat was kwl bru. I luvd dat poem keep it up

Date: 4/1/2008 10:25:56 AM
Nickname: Hildi
Comment: Mwaaaaaaaaaaah.piesang its gr8

Date: 3/26/2008 6:44:14 AM
Nickname: Deadflower
Comment: I remember da day ya wrote dis! I liked da poem. Was real good. Try da end wasnt da best but still was awesome! I gotta see this bridge!

Date: 2/26/2008 10:26:22 AM
Nickname: Tarryn
Comment: U hav a way wid words, da way u express urself is beautiful.

Date: 2/25/2008 10:27:26 PM
Nickname: [None]
Comment: I love da imagery uv created..it reali draws one in 2bcum part of da poem n actually see or should i say invision the person seekin refuge unda da bridge wit al da noise n other tings that he bcumz imune 2 bcoz thats hs hme nw n therefore has 2make it work..i love ur choice of words very gud,howeva i didnt expect u 2end it lyk that so that was a bit disapointin u cudv added mo depth 2da endin u knw as da concludin line n al eitha than that,its fabulous

Date: 2/25/2008 6:29:31 PM
Nickname: JeN
Comment: Im speechless. Pure excellence. I love it x

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